HCIP-Data_Center_Facility_Deployment_V1.0_Training_Material material problem

Latest reply: Aug 7, 2019 14:16:11 140 6 0 0

Hello!
I found some "bugs" in the HCIP-Data_Center_Facility_Deployment_V1.0_Training_Material.pdf:

Page 11 (Smart DC: Digital, Networked and Intelligent): at the left figure there are problems with labels. They are overlapped and some words are breaked.

Page 14: In the middle of the page there is a black square. Looks like image is missed.

Page 20: missed two images.

Page 26: please check labels color. The black ones are sometimes at the darkgrey background and they are hard to read.

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Peterhof
Created Aug 7, 2019 12:00:35 Helpful(0) Helpful(0)

Page 15, 16, 17: at the power diagram there is no IT load. Just ECC800.
Page 17: int the right bottom corner there is a misstake "3. Power PDB". Should be "4. Power PDB".
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Peterhof
Created Aug 7, 2019 12:08:10 Helpful(0) Helpful(0)

Please check numbering at the pages 19 and 20. They are counting from left to right at one place then from right to left in next place. It is hard to check them at the figure.
At the pages 21 - 24 the black and white diagrams are very hard to read. Could you please make separate colors for different power lines?
Check the "POER PDB" and "POEWR PDB" labels there.
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Peterhof
Created Aug 7, 2019 12:47:34 Helpful(0) Helpful(0)

Page 23 (93): the gray boxes with labels hide some power links at the right bottom corner.
Page 32 (102): "110%-130% ... (inbattery mode)"
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Peterhof
Created Aug 7, 2019 13:11:36 Helpful(0) Helpful(0)

Page 44 (114): the dimensions of the UPSes are the same. Maybe it is a good idea to combine them in one big cell?
Page 49 (119): at the "number of batteries" line writen "lead-acid batteries" for each version of the UPS, and then at line "Battery type..." writen that VRLA is the only supported variant. Maybe batteries types should not be described at the first line?
Page 50 (121): "Parallel feature" is described for all the UPS models. Is that right?
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Peterhof
Created Aug 7, 2019 13:22:04 Helpful(0) Helpful(0)

Page 54 (124): the first table header is missed (UPS2000-G-3K ?).
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Peterhof
Created Aug 7, 2019 14:16:11 Helpful(0) Helpful(0)

Page 14 (288): in the second item dot sign is placed in wrong place. "50%. footprint" instead of "50% footprint."
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