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The improvement activities of Huawei delivery materials

is currently in progress. Come on.

The improvement activities of Huawei delivery materials is currently in progress. Welcome everybody to participate in, also expect you have better ideas and suggestions.

1.  Target

Delivery materials is part of the product, the material’s quality directly affects the customer experience on product, also affects the satisfaction of customer.

The errors of delivery materials may be classified by the following categories:Errors in grammar , error contents, error step , lack of guidance, unreasonable design,etc.

This activity need you to find out the problems in using Huawei delivery materials, give us your suggestions, and improve the quality of Huawei delivery materials.

2  Object

The delivery materials on http://support.huawei.com/enterprise/

3  Time

Feedback:   2013-3-28 to 2013-5-31

Review time: 2013-6-1 to 2013-6-15

4  rules

Please feedback at this forum, you can reply the post as the following way.

Document No.:

Document Name.:

Website link:

Problem section:

Problem description:

Modify suggestion:

Please feedback with specific suggestions, such as "cannot understand", "bad writing", "guidance is not strong" , otherwise they will be invalid because we cannot effectively  improve the documentation.

5. Award

The participants on Chinese Web site and English Web site will be ranked together, according to the number of effective feedback, the forefront participants can obtain the prizes.

First prize (one person): The prize value about 1000 RMB

Second prize(one person): The prize value about 500 RMB

Third prize (two person): The prize value about 100 RMB

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 Actually I have a suggestion about modifying  the first sentence in section 4. Rules.

Right now it's : Please feedback specific suggestions, such as "can not understand", "write bad", "guidance is not strong" can not be effectively improved will be invalid.

 

1. "write bad" should be changed to either "written badly" or "bad writing"

2. change "can not" to "cannot", both versions are correct but the second one (cannot) is largely used more.

3. This whole sentence doesn't make sense to me. I would like to suggest modifying  it to: Please feedback with specific suggestions, such as "cannot understand", "bad writing", "guidance is not strong" , otherwise they will be invalid because we cannot effectively  improve the documentation.

 

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Website lacks to give basic understanding of Huawei network devices in terms of hardware where in one can get idea of datacom equipments.


There has to be guidelines on MPU, LPU, CMU, BKP & their functions.


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Thank you very much.

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